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Frozen solid, her heart will not beat,
Summer over, arctic winds won’t retreat,
All warmth and light has fled,
And you won’t last long there,
Her heart it’s a tundra in winter,
A winter heart, all dead.

The snow falling your love a breeze,
You won’t last long, you'll just freeze
Icicles from the past  have froze her core,
Only warm hearts will change the season
Her heart it’s a tundra in winter
A winter heart, you've fallen for
Written by Roselyn Edwards
Status: Final Draft
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GrimAsEver Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
I enjoyed this a bunch. ^^
Great work.
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
thank you so much :) I've been working on it for awhile now trying to get it perfect but i still feel likes it's choppy :(
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GrimAsEver Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
I think it is absolutely perfect, ma'am. c:
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
*Blushes thank you@
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nosferatu4444 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
pretty, makes me feel glowing inside:D
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
really?! it's not stupid then?
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nosferatu4444 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't think so:)
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Professional Writer
Lovely poetry...
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Writer
thank you thank you a bunch for all the comments! :D
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Professional Writer
:iconmartiniplz: :iconwelcome1plz::iconwelcome2plz::iconwelcome3plz::iconwelcome4plz:
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