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Everything is so messed up
I’m so confused
I should be crying,
But instead I’m laughing
Laughing…
At death.
Laughing…
At my last breath.

When the world is backwards
I’m so confused
The sky is ground
The north is south
And I find myself swinging
From the cobblestones
And with dirty hands, walking
Gripping with knuckle bones

Why is it, turned all around
I’m so confused
Yes means no
Wrong is right
And I’m enthralled with hurting people
Destroying their souls
And living, but actually dead
And somehow hurt consoles

At this rate I’ll be
Falling down to heaven
Or flying up to hell

To really understand this world of opposition
And upside-downs
When I try to call my friend
Turns out she’s the enemy
And when I think I’m singing
I’m actually really cursing
And all around me
They all just do the same

When normality's are no longer normality's
I’m so confused
When Beauty is ugly
And scars are lovely
Gets pretty hard to disguise the outside
When one day you realize the inside is outside
More to add to the jumble when
You love what you hate and hate what you love

Everything is either upside down or backwards
Confusing…
What goes up never comes down
And what goes wrong never goes better



Everything is so messed up
I’m so confused
I should be laughing
But instead I’m crying
Crying…
Because I’m alive
Crying…
Because I survive.
...let me know what you think.. please :)
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SirWombat14 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is.. . Wow... and when I read your comment saying that you think your writings are just scribbles YOU ARE WRONG. This is a twisted, deep, and emotional. Keep up the good work
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student Writer
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MabusTheDark Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Life is quite a maze of contradiction. There are some seriously powerful emotions going on here, and it's great that I could read this. :)
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks for the comment :) I'm glad you read it even though most of the time I think most of my writings are just worthless scribblings on paper lol
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MabusTheDark Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
They are only as worthless as you give them weight for. ^_^ I thought this one was good.
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SuperGirlSwag Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
beautiful
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
thanks :)
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nosferatu4444 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
"When Beauty is ugly
And scars are lovely"

best part of the poem:)

also I think the rest is pretty good but it might work better as a song.^^
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
yea, it was late when I wrote this and I was upset and confused so it kind of flopped onto the page rather suddenly, with not much pre-thought, as a consequence of this the whole thing is rather unpoetic but it's free verse so I didn't pay special attention to any rhyme scheme, and quite honestly I don't really want to change it except for a few lines I put that seem pointless and I'll probably either remove them or replace. :)
Anyways thanks for the comment...and I suppose you may be right about turning it to lyrics but, I suck at lyrics and I don't write music very well so I wouldn't know where to start.
Again thanks ! I appreciate your opinion!
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nosferatu4444 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I said these work better as lyrics for a reason, so I don't get how you can say you suck at lyrics.

and music works perfectly in colabs so maybe you just have to find a musician:)
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