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Bare thunder-charged hooves
Pound heavily upon the earth's aching back
Clear cutting impressions in its skin
Baring down on it without mercy

From the flaring contempt nostrils
To the free floating mane through tail
The animal clear in his intention
Battles in flight to the horizon

His breath streaming gaseous steam
As blood rushes freedom through his veins
The earth's poles impress upon his spirit
But his anger and strength surpasses

Every hoof leaves a bloody trail
The earth breaking with each stride
Miles and miles of painful change
Is repaid by a snort and a spiteful neigh

The beast has put acres between
Its captors, its dark eyes are set ahead
Even though the wind screaming back
Through, its very mind being steel framed

Nothing can hold it back not gravity
Look at it, tall powerful, graceful
Freedom sounds through every node
Its breathtaking to behold
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:icondragonschest:
=DragonsChest Nov 23, 2012  Professional Writer
Fantastic... :w00t:
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*roselynedwards Nov 23, 2012  Student Writer
thanks
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:icondragonschest:
=DragonsChest Nov 24, 2012  Professional Writer
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:iconsquibblyquill:
it's like a moving word painting (last line needs an apostrophe: It's)
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*roselynedwards Nov 20, 2012  Student Writer
yea its more of a description I was just bored and picturing stuff in my mind and had to write it down lol
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:iconsquibblyquill:
it's cool. Reminds me of the song by America...horse with no name
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*roselynedwards Nov 21, 2012  Student Writer
thanks :)
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