Kiss me, just kiss me
Put your lips on mine,
Just kiss me.
Feel the pressure condescending
All the pleasure, it's never ending
Undermines reality, that's filtering in
Kiss me now, pleasure, it's not a sin
All my passion, touch and feel
Your response has released its seal
Breathe me, just breathe me;
Put your mouth on mine,
And just breathe me.
Feel the warmth, it fills you
My sweet breath, it kills you
Just open, your lungs and breathe,
All the passion that you conceive
Swallowing intoxication,
Just feeling now the wild provocation
Taste me, just taste me;
Put your tongue on mine,
And just taste me.
Feel my skin so luxurious,
Making you all furious
Your mind beyond this fragile world
It's filled with me and then I'm hurled
Taste me, all my sweet surrender
And my tongue so soft it's tender
Kiss me, just kiss me
Breathe me, just breathe me
Taste me, just taste me
It made me think of mermaids under water. When you kiss them, breathe them, and taste them, then you drown.
Falling in love is very similar.
And I think it's cool that my poem made you 'think'
Although the original intention of the poem was not about mermaids that's an excellent observation! And kiss me never had anything about drowning or the down side of love in it...and i want to keep it that way