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I'm Unfortunate,
Unlucky,
and Afflicted;
You're contagious,
and I've behaved,
Outrageous,
and rather Unjustly.
Only together a mere while,
And I'm infected,
With every word
of Affection,
that on me you've tested.
Tear me apart
and no longer leave me to suffer,
of this disease you've inflicted;
where I have no choice
But to think of you,
all day,
and in my dreams at night.
Cure me, out of your good will, my lover
for I fear I'm lovesick still.
Written by Roselyn Edwards
Status: Final Draft
Form: Free Verse
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Heartwrenching.... You're a very talented writer. :)
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Student Writer
Positivity such as you demonstrate is liable to drive any artist or writer to success :) keep it up ;)
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:giggle: I try.... :blush: Everybody needs random strangers to tell them they're awesome. I believe if I think something nice about a person, I should not leave it unsaid.
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Student Writer
:) I couldn't have said it better myself
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D Sweet.
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Everlasting90 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This reminds me of the song "Can't Say No" by Tinashe.
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Student Writer
haha really seems like a lot of my writings people have referred to them that they remind them of songs but i swear i've never even heard the song can't say no by tinashe
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Everlasting90 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sadly, it's not a popular song. She was an indie artist now she's signed to RCA

Here's the link (if you'r interested):[link]
I used it it my teaser for my story.
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Student Writer
ok awesomee
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squibblyquill Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
Interesting, is this a double entendre? As in, are you thinking of a real disease and also of a relationship with a person simultaneously?
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Student Writer
I don't know it was a stupid poem. really. haha.
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squibblyquill Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
no it wasn't stupid, why do you think it was stupid?
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Student Writer
I don't know I think my feelings are stupid a lot; you know? It's hard for me to accept sometimes that I am actually a human being.
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squibblyquill Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
Well, for what it's worth, I don't think your feelings are stupid. Trust me, you are a thoughtful and clever person. And yeah, sometimes it is hard accepting that we are human. But limitation isn't necessarily a bad thing, in my opinion. Limitation is a great way of learning. For when you run into a horizon that you cannot cross, you are given the gift of a beautiful vision that transcends that limit.
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Student Writer
that was beautifully said thanks :)
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squibblyquill Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013
thanks, you say some nice things too!
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